TO: members of the suburban emerging writers of erotica roundtable (s.e.w.e.r.)
FROM: designated weekly reviewer, for week ended 3-nov-2018
hey gang! bob here.
as you know it was my turn to serve as weekly reviewer. i admit i was initially disappointed. i apologize. it's just that i really wanted my short story to get into this week's reading pool. guess it'll have to wait until next week when i am not reviewing. oh well. i am excited for you all to read what i wrote. i think it's pretty good.
now, feedback time.
as one of the newest members i was a bit worried about the responsibilities. but my term to review was a breeze. and a lot of fun. i thoroughly enjoyed everyone's work, efforts and results. only one cloud in the sky during my sunday reading of the submissions, a single constructive comment i have to share: i did jerk out of one story when i came across the turn of phrase "inchoate chubby." stylistically it seemed out of place, the phrasing contrived maybe.
thanks for the opportunity to perform this vital function for the group. see you all next week.
<< subtext: litfic + erotica don't mix. and if they can be combined you don't have the skills to pull that shit off, geoff. inchoate chubby? come on now. and i cut you some slack and didn't mention the "blossoming hard-on" line. wtf! was that all about? >>
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